Please pick one of the images and create a scene and the dialogue to go with it. Have fun but remember to follow the grammatical rules for writing dialogue. Your blog response should be a minimum of 5-7 sentences in length. Don't forget to leave your first and last name along with your class block. Your response is due by Friday, October 26 by 4 p.m.
Mrs. Allan
Here's a hint, start with a snapshot of the moment and quickly jump into the conversation. You don't have to write a story, just describe the situation and include dialogue.
ReplyDeleteThe score was 6-6 in the bottom of the 9th inning. There were two outs with a runner on first base. The runner's name was Alex. He knew he had to get to second base in order for him to get in scoring position.
ReplyDeleteThe pitcher went into the wind up. Alex bolted for second.
"He's going!" All of the infielders screamed. Pop! The ball hit the catcher's glove, and a second later he was gunning the ball to second. Alex dove for the bag. The shorstop caught the ball ready to tag the runner. Alex slid into second. The shortstop tagged Alex.
"He's Safe!" The umpire roared. Alex had got in just in time.
"Yes," Alex whispered to himself. Next pitch his teamate Bradley hit a shot to the left field gap scoring Alex. It was a walk-off win!
Vlaisavich, Alex
LASS 4-5 Allan
10-22-12
Blog Response
Picture #2 (baseball)
Amy lay in her warm bed, feeling more sick than she had in months. She wished that she would have been able to enjoy the nice Saturday outside in the sun, but instead she had to suffer a 24 hour flu with a thermometer in her mouth and a box of kleenex at her side. Amy yelled as loud as she could through her scratchy voice, "Mom, will you please make me some Clam Chowder?"
ReplyDelete"Yes, Amy. Give me a few minutes," her mom replied.
Amy found herself dosing off. She suddenly awoke as her mom slowly walked into her bedroom with the soup.
"Thank you, mom," Amy quietly said as her mom handed her the soup.
"Your welcome... Now please get better!"
Kenna Sandblast
Per-1/2
10/22/12
Derp and Derpina were sitting on the railroad tracks talking about the football game on friday. The Hubba-Bubba Hedghogs won to the Kingdoms Kingly Crowns 25-20. This was their usual place after school-the abandoned railroad.
ReplyDelete"That was a close game," Derp said.
"Yes," replied Derpina, "at least we won by 5 points."
Derp pulled a football out of his bag and said, "Let's play catch."
They passed the ball around for a while, but they were getting bored.
"I wish there was a train still running on these tracks, so we could get around faster," Derpina said.
They passed the ball around some more until they heard some rumbling.
Derp yelled, "Earthquake!" and both of them dropped to the ground on the tracks. Sadly, it was not an earthquake, but Derpina's wish had came true. There was a mighty bullet train zooming down the tracks and could not stop. Suddenly, the sky turned dark and the train exploded.
"Well that was exciting," Derp said.
"At least we didn't get run over," Derpina replied.
After that, they kept on playing football like nothing had happened.
Mr. Alexander Lukacs
LA/SS PER 4/5
Picture #1 (2 people sitting on railroad tracks)
Derp isn't very smart, but nice story though :)
DeleteFinn Michener
4/5 LA/SS
It was a perfect Saturday evening at the lake. Amy watched her little sister, Ellie, and her brother, Josh while they tried to catch fish.
ReplyDelete" Can I go swimming in the lake?", said Ellie.
" Not today Ellie, it's getting cold, we should head back to the camp site", said Amy. So the siblings went back to their campsite and enjoyed the warmth from the camp fire. They roasted s'mores as the stars began to shine down on them.
Faith Bergeron
LA/SS Per. 4/5
Picture #3
Hannah was in bed sick, she felt miserable. She wanted to go to her best friends play but she had a fever of 101°. Her best friend Katy was going to pick her up to go to the play, what was she going to tell her friend? Ding dong, the door bell rang, Hannah’s friend was here. Her mom opened the door, “why hello Katy, Hannah is in the other room you can go see her. Katy walked over to the room Hannah was in, “hello?” Hannah asked in a weak voice. “oh my gosh” Katy said, what she saw made her want to run away, her friend was in a horrible wreck, her face was tomato red, with a thermometer in her mouth and medicine was on her bedside. “I know I look horrible, I feel horrible as well. Um I can’t really go to um your play, I feel really bad, and I hope you do well, I was going to tell you but…” Hannah didn't finish, she saw Katy break into a huge grin she said, “Remember we swore that whatever situation we are in we will still be friends? Well you are still my friend, maybe you can’t see my play, but that’s not the last play I will be in, besides you need to get well. It’s truly fine, get some rest and I’ll see you later Hannah.” With that Katy left and went to her play alone
ReplyDeleteCarolyn Miller
LASS Per. 1-2
October 23rd 2012
On a sunny day in a forest in western Oregon, a girl, Madeleine, talks with her friend, Alex, as they sit on train tracks no longer in use. Madeleine says, “How do you want to escape?” Alex responds, “We can follow the train tracks until we get out of the forest.” “Okay, then lets get a move on before dusk,” Madeleine replies back. They walk ten miles and find a small town. Alex says, “Let’s see where we can check in for the night and get some sleep.” They walk up to a motel and ask for a room. The person at the front desk gives them a room key. When they walk in, they fall into a pit of lava, but wake up at the University of Oregon. It was all just a dream and they continue on with their day.
ReplyDeleteO’Brien, Madeleine
LASS ½
10/23/12
Blog Response
As the sun rose over the quiet lake, The two children peered over the beauty. "What does it all mean? Life and all" Asked the girl. " I don't even know, But its sure is wonderful" Replied the boy as a somewhat larger grin appeared on his face. The fishing pole jerked suddenly and the boy reacted slowly, but cautiously to not lose the fish. He slowly relied the line in until the fish appeared on the surface. He took the fish off the hook and carefully put it back in the water and watched it gracefully swim away. "Life is such a fragile thing, I would hate to see it go" Said the boy, now staring at the bright rays of sun settling on the water. "Thats so true" Smiled the little girl. The boy joined her with a smile, And together they continued to take in the fresh air, the sun rising, and...Life
ReplyDeleteFinn Michener
LA/SS
Period 4/5
Picture #3
It was a beautiful day. The sky was blue and the birds were chirping. But the only reason Savannah Silver knew this was because of the window in her hospital room. Today she felt much less faint, much better than the day before.
ReplyDelete"Savannah", a woman's voice asked, it was Mrs. Silver.
Savannah looked up but couldn't raise her head too much after the injury.
"Hi mom", she replied, faintly and tried to smile but couldn't lift her head up any longer. Her mother walked toward her and looked over her crippled body, knowing it was all her fault, and began to sob.
She sobbed and said "I'm so sorry,"
She cried held her head in her hands, "I'm sorry."
Savannah looked at her mom above her, then turned away. When she saw gray clouds, a tear ran down her cheek.
Whitley Pleas
LA/SS period 4/5
Not a single soul was on the lake that day, just the two kids, brother and sister. They were stranded on an island with just a fishing pole and some wood. How they got stranded there, they dont know. They are too young to know how to get a fire going so all they have is raw fish to eat, if they even catch any.
ReplyDelete"How do we get out of here?" the girl questioned.
"I have no clue." the young boy said.
"How long have we been here?" the girl started to sob. "When will we get to see our parents again?" she asked.
"We have only been here for one night, but we need to find a way off of this island." the boy started to wander off.
He goes to the other side of the island, sees some houses on the other side of the lake.
"Hey come come over here Sarah! I see some houses!"
Sarah comes racing over. "Wow Billy that one looks like our's," she started to cry again.
"Holy cow that is our house!" the boy cried.
"Look there is a raft floating towards us." Sarah cried. They pondered on how to get it. Billy finally stepped up and said, "I will swim out to get it."
"Be careful!" Sarah yelled. Billy was knee deep into the water when he felt a searing pain on his foot. A roch had just cut his foot. He knew he had to get to the raft though. He swam and swam until he got to it. He crawled into it and started to paddle with his hand oer to the island to get his sister.
"I'm almost there!" he yelled to his sister. for some reason he felt he was not alone on the boat. His sister had a terrifyed look on her face, he turned around and saw a large black figure sitting there with him.
Tyler Voelzke
LA/SS period 1/2
It was a hot summer day when little Sarah and John went fishing at the lake. They hadn't caught much of anything, so they are just about to go home.
ReplyDelete"Can we go home yet?" cried Sarah.
"Not yet, We just have to keep waiting for a little while longer." said John.
"Well you said fishing would be fun." pouted Sarah.
"Wait I think I might have gotten something!"
Sarah immediately springs up to look at the water. As John reals in the line they see a big fish come up. "We should go show dad so we can have it for dinner!" Sarah says excitingly. They make it back home just before sunset.
Christenson, Jackie
LA/SS period 4/5
Picture #3
Jimmy was never good at planning and now it has got him into trouble again. He had procrastinated and had a test and a project due tomorrow. What am I going to do, he kept thinking.
ReplyDeleteThen, his mom walks by and says, "You should start doing your homework instead of just sitting there."
"I just feel so overwhelmed." Jimmy says.
"I know, I had the same problem in high school when I was young. Just start doing your homework and it won't feel so scary."
" Okay."
Jimmy ended up getting a B on his project and did equally well on his test.
Max Chu
LASS 4/5
Lucy had made the worst mistake of her life, playing truth or dare with her brother. Lucy did truth on her brother to see who he liked. He confessed and she felt proud, until he gave her a dare. Lucy wasn't a person to back down from a dare so she accepted. The dare was she had to walk all the way down the railroad track from where it started by their house until she saw someone.
ReplyDelete"But, who would be out on the track?!"
"Better start and see," he snickered.
Lucy glared but nodded. So the next morning she woke up bright and early and started down the track. She looked around hoping someone would at least show their face but no one did.
She began calling out "Hello? Hello?" waiting to hear a response but there was only silence.
After about an hour, she guessed, she collapsed on the track. She was tired and her heart felt heavy. She started to feel dizzy when she remembered something her mom once said.
"If you really want something never give up trying until it is physically and mentally impossible."
With that Lucy stood up and took a deep breath and with all her lung power she called out one more time as loud as she could "Hello?!"
Then she heard a voice and saw a figure up ahead.
"Hey my name is Jimmy, I work on fixing the tracks and I heard your voice so I came to what was wrong.
Lucy blushed and began to explain to Jimmy.
"Wow, sounds like you've been walking far. Here let's take a break."
Then Lucy and Jimmy sat down and began to build a long lasting friendship on the railroad track.
Emily, Meyer
LA/SS period 1/2
Picture #1
One beautiful day at the lake two children named Chere and Toby were fishing and having a wonderful time. Chere exclaimed, "Hey I think we got one!" Toby, to excited to answer reeled in this massive fish. As he brought it in Toby yells, "It's a Rainbow Trout!" The two are so excited and brought it to their parents to see. Their parents are astonished by the extremely large fish in Toby and Chere's hands. The family took out their barbeque and cooked the lovely fish.
ReplyDeleteSonora Strate
LA/SS 4/5
The surrounding piles of books around Timmy made him more stressed out. Nothing could go worse. He had tests, assignments, quizzes, and tons of homework due the next day. To make matters worse, his mother burst into the room.
ReplyDelete“I just looked at your grades young man and you are in big trouble!”
Timmy just stared down at his books and pretended to be working on a math problem. It was a story problem, his least favorite.
“You need to step it up and start focusing more on your homework or there will be no more game time for you.’’
Veshagh, Hoda
LA/SS Period 1/2
Picture #5
Thomas was about to give up on the mountain of homework. He had already spent three whole hours on his homework and hadn’t even dented the piles of work surrounding him. To add to all the stress, he had forgotten that he had basketball practice in five minutes.
ReplyDelete“Thomas,” called his mom from the bottom of the steep stairs, “ are you ready for your basketball practice?”
“ Coming Mom,” he replied slamming down his French book and grabbing his basketball clothes.
“I’ll do my homework after basketball practice,” he thought. Later that evening at practice he remembered that his homework wasn’t due tomorrow but the following week.
Lija Jones
LASS period 1/2
Picture # 5
It was one sunny day for going outside and just having fun but unfortunately Herp had to go to school when it was still dark outside. He waited forever for the bus at the bus stop and said to his friend Lerp “When will it get here. “ “I don’t know,” Lerp said, “It will probably come 30 minutes late.” The bus finally came and drove Herp to school. At school he went through all the periods of the day and in each one he got one small assignment. These little assignments piled up into an enormous one. He walked home slowly not looking forward to doing homework. His mom said, “Do your homework.” He spent 3 hours on the assignments and finally went to bed at 11:00 to wake up to another day of more homework.
ReplyDeletePeriod 4/5
DeletePicture #6
Rusty was a senior. He really wanted to go to college, but didn't want to study. "What am I gonna do?" He asked his mom one day. "Young man, you stick to your goals, and get into college." His mom replied. Rusty went to the library, and got some books on college. "Thanks for coming! Have a nice day!" The librarian called as he walked out. Three weeks later, he was in his room with his piles of books stacked all around him. "Finally!!" He exclaimed. "I can start applying!" Later that day, the mail came. He found on for him. He opened it and started reading. "OH MY GOD!!!" He shouted. His mom ran down and saw the huge bill in Rusty's hands. "$200 for 50 overdue books?!" His mom screamed. Rusty was very ashamed of himself.
ReplyDeleteLi, Alex
DeleteLA/SS pr. 4/5
Picture #6
On the first day of school, Bob was wondering what his new classes would be like. "Do you think the teachers will give a lot of homework?" he asked his friend Joe. "Well," said Joe, "I heard Mr. Dude gives a lot of homework." "Oh, no," Bob said, looking at his schedule, "I have him first period!" Bob walked to Mr. Dude's science class and sat in an empty chair. Mr. Dude came up to him and slammed a book on his desk. It was called "Science for Dummies". When Bob got home that day, he had a 264 page packet to complete for science, due the next day. ;)
ReplyDeleteKaitlyn Coder, Period 4/5
It was a hot summer day. The sun beat on the kids faces as it warmed the water around their feet.
ReplyDelete"Do you think well get any?" inquired Abi. It had been two hours since Abi and her brother Marshal and had caught the last fish.
"Of course we will catch a fish Abi!" exclaimed Marshal.
There was a splash in the water. With a flick of the fishing pole Abi caught a fish. Suddenly the bobber went down for Marshal too! They left the lake that day with their family feeling excited that they had snagged three fish!
-Leah Mize
LA/SS PER. 1/2
Picture #3
It was the frisdt day of seventh grade. Max was ancious to meet his teachers but dident no if he wouled have homework. "Max you'l need to finish that two page report on bioligy by tusday" said Max'es since teacher. "Max you need to do page three and five by monday" said his math teacher."Max you need that perimid on the egeptions by monday " said his S.S teacher. "man how will I ever finish all of this homework" said Max?
ReplyDeleteJT, Morris LA,SS 4/5
I ment frist in the frist sentence
ReplyDeleteJT, Morris LA,SS 4/5
There we were, the four of us, my brother Eric, my dad, Mr. Gidos, and me. Sitting out on the water there were no boat around us, only fish around us. The huge birds perched atop the tree searching for their breakfast. Paulina Lake was the perfect place to go fishing. They are stocked full of fish like Trout, but the bad part of fishing here is that there are other fish illegally stocked here.
ReplyDelete“I caught one, I caught one,” Eric yelled as he grabbed the first fish of the day!
“You know what that is called? ” Mr. Gidos exclaimed, “it’s a junk fish, lets kill it, the government wants us to.”
“Why can’t we eat them?” Eric wondered.
“They full of bones and they don’t taste good at all,” Mr. Gidos continued, “You grab this humongous wire and smack the fishes head 3 times to kill it. Then, you chuck the fish as far as you can and watch the osprey come and eat their delicious breakfast of bones and freshly caught junk fish.
Ryan Seaman
Lass 4/5 Allan
Picture # 3
Sorry Mrs. Allan I looked it over and I noticed that the was a mix of tenses and a few other mistakes, so I fixed it. Here is a revised version of it!...
DeleteThere we are, the four of us, my brother Eric, my dad, Mr. Gidos, and me. Sitting out on the water there are no boats around us, only fish. The huge birds sat perched atop the tree searching for their breakfast. Paulina Lake is the perfect place to go fishing. It is stocked full of fish like trout, but the bad part of fishing here is that there are other fish illegally stocked here.
“I caught one, I caught one,” Eric yelled as he grabbed the first fish of the day!
“You know what that is called? ” Mr. Gidos exclaimed, “it’s a junk fish. Lets kill it. The government wants us to.”
“Why can’t we eat them?” Eric wondered.
“They are full of bones and they don’t taste good at all,” Mr. Gidos continued, “You grab this humongous wire and smack the fishes head 3 times to kill it. Then, you chuck the fish as far as you can and watch the osprey come and eat their delicious breakfast of bones and freshly caught junk fish."
Ryan Seaman
Lass 4/5 Allan
Picture # 3
“So, what do you want to do tomorrow? I mean, we could go the Laser show, or that new movie, or...” Robby trailed off, the question hanging in the air.
ReplyDelete“Well a movie would be kinda awkward, ‘cause people might think it’s a date, and… you stuff,” Anya was sure she was blushing. In all honesty, she would love to go on a date with Robby. She loved his quirky little smile, his cute way of turning anything mean into a joke, and, well, everything about him. He was perfect!
He coughed, and rubbed the back of his neck. “Well, m-maybe… maybe I-it could be?... I mean…um… if-if you want to…”
WHAT? Is-is he blushing?!? Oh my god! He wants to go out with me? Yes! Yes! YES!!!
“Well…” She started, but then she heard something in the background… was that a train?
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Oh crud! Anya jumped up, and started to make for the side of the tracks, but stopped and turned.
“Robby! Come on! A train’s coming!” He was jerking his leg, but it wouldn’t move. “Come on!!!”
“I Can’t! My skinnies are caught! And I can’t get them free!” His leg wasn’t moving….
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWOWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
“ROBBY! IT’S RIGHT AROUND THE CORNER! COME ON!” She screeched. Anya made to help him, but he looked at her, with defeat in his eyes, and put his hand up.
“Anya, my skinnies aren’t coming loose any time soon, and I don’t want you to die,” He said it so calmly, with such resignation, that she hesitated.
“Anya, I-“
The train cut him off, crashing into his body, and what was left.
There was blood everywhere. Everything suddenly became surreal. He can’t be dead. She had been talking to him only two minutes ago. No no nO NO!
Anya screamed with rage, pain, all the anguish came rushing at her, and Anya collapsed, into a sobbing, shaking mess.
She didn’t respond when the police showed up.
She didn’t respond when they wiped the blood off her body.
She didn’t respond when they asked her what happened.
Eventually, they pieced it together. The committee had approved an off-schedule freighter the day before, and that ‘stupid teenager’ hadn’t known about it.
And then, so clearly you could almost hear it, Anya snapped.
She got up, walked over and picked up Robby’s pocket knife. It was slightly twisted, and covered with blood.
She walked over to the police man that had called Robby the ‘stupid teenager with no sense’.
“Mr. Police-man sir?”
“Yes?”
“Bye bye.”
Claire Brown
LASS 1/2
10/25/12
It was a chilly and pouring fall evening and Hugo was wandering down the line of the railroad tracks. He didn’t know how long he had been walking, or why he had left his warm house too come outside, where the autumn rain stung his cheeks. As he walked he saw a figure up ahead, coming towards him. His first instinct was to run, but he didn’t. Oddly enough, Hugo just stood there, wondering why someone else would be outside in this weather. Especially because it was almost dark. He ended up running towards the figure. When he reached the person he realized it was a girl with dark, bedraggled hair. She looked about fifteen, which was Hugo’s age.
ReplyDelete“Who are you?” he asked.
“My name’s Chloe.” The mysterious girl replied, “Who are you?”
“Hugo.”
“Well Hugo, what are you doing out here in the rain?” Chloe asked in a friendly tone.
“I could ask you the same thing!” Hugo replied.
“Well, I came to get away. I don’t know why, I just sometimes feel that my life is too complicated. That’s when I decide to walk on the tracks.” She replied, sitting down on the ground with a sigh.
“So I take it you’ve been here before?” Hugo asked. He sat down across from her and stared into Chloe’s eyes. They were a piercing blue, and they greatly contrasted with the dark sky behind her. “Do you come here often?”
“Every time I feel overwhelmed or lonely, I just walk a little farther down the track. I don’t know why.”
“Have trains ever come by?”
“Not that I know of.” Chloe answered.
For a whole they just sat there, occasionally talking and telling each other about their lives, their families. Suddenly, Hugo looked up. There was a bright light coming towards them and a loud noise following it.
“Chloe, we need to get out of here! Now!” Hugo screamed, yanking Chloe’s arm.
Chloe got up, looking confused. When she saw the train, she just stood there, as still as a statue. Hugo finally got her out of the way just in time. The train sped by and blew the kids backwards. Chloe grabbed onto Hugo and started crying.
“I almost got you killed!” She sobbed.
“Don’t cry,” Hugo said, comforting her. “It’s not your fault.”
Chloe wiped away her tears and hugged him and whispered, “Thank you.”
Kelly, Sierra
LA/SS period 1/2
10-25-12
It was the bottom of the ninth. We were tied five, five. It was up to me to hit the last ball to win the game. I needed a home run. The pitcher gave me these weird nods, then the ball flew. I swung as hard as I could and closed my eyes.
ReplyDelete"STRIKE ONE!" the umpire exclaimed.
I gave him 'oh thanks I didn't know' face, full of sarcasm. I was the hot head on my team.
The same sequence repeated again. Except on the third hit, well it went something like this.
The pitcher does the weird nods, he throws the ball. Again I close my eyes and swing as ever hard as I could. This time was the time. The ball went way out of the park! It was crazy! As the crowd went wild I moon walked to each base, just to rub it in there faces. If there's anything more than I love than being a hot head it's rubbing my victory's in my opponents faces. When I was moon walking to each base the kids were saying stuff to me like,
"Dude it's not that big of a deal!"
Then of course I said, "Oh, but it is!"
When I wasn't paying attention one of the guys tripped me as I was going past him.
I yelled back at him, "Oh I'm sorry, are my skills to awesome for you?"
Of course that made my team crack up and fall on the ground laughing so hard. That was a great victory, can't wait for our next!
Annie Rodgers
LA/SS 4/5
10-25-12
It was a warm, July day on Wammpannoa lake. The sun was shining in the cloudless, blue sky. Peter and his younger sister, Penelope, were sitting in chairs on the bank of the lake, a fishing pole planted in the soft, white sand in between the two chairs. They had promised their dad the biggist fish he had ever seen, and now were suffering under the hot sun because of it. "Come on Peter," Penelope wailed."We've been here for 3 hours and haven't got so much as a nibble. I'm getting burned to a crisp. I want to go HOME!"
ReplyDeletePeter groaned. He couldn't decide what was worse, getting burned to a crisp in the 102F weather or having to put up with his little sister. Granted she was only five and was a GIRL, it was her tendancy to complain. He was so glad that he was 4 years older and able to put up with certian things that Penelope's brain demanded to whine about. "Shut up Penelope!" Peter demanded."I promised dad a big fish and i'm not leaving this lake until I get one. Do you want supper or not?"
"But..."
"No buts, we are getting that fish."
As soon as they settled into their chairs again, there was a mammoth tug in the line. Peter sprung up out of his chair and grabbed the rod. The force on the other end nearly pulled him in. Using all the force his scrawny legs could muster, he hauled himself back towards the chairs. "Penelope, come help me reel it in. It feels like the one!"
Penelope jumped out of her chair and joined Peter on the line. Together, they managed to haul the fish in. When it flopped onto the beach, they both ogled at it. It was the biggest fish they'ed ever seen. It was at least two feet long and weighed about ten pounds. "WHOOOO!!" Peter yelled in triumph, his voice echoing across the lake." We did it Penelope!"
Peter hoisted the two chairs onto his sholder along with the fishing rod. When they got home, they proudly presented the fish to their dad who said, "wow, what a catch!"
Peter beamed from ear to ear. That is until he walked into the house and saw a fish identical to the fish he had just caught,but 5 times bigger, mounted on the wall.
Mac Roberts
Period 1\2
picture 3 (fishing)
ReplyDeleteAs James slid into 2nd he was safe and the ball passed the glove of Jimmy Brand,
all-star shortstop and league MVP. As James’s mom yells from the stands “Go James go!” and started for 3rd. When he was half way to 3rd, the center fielder picked up the ball and threw it in. Then James rounded the 3rd and headed for home. At that moment the ball had reached the catcher witch started to run at James. Then James stopped in his tracks and headed back to 3rd then the catcher threw it to 3rd. This happened several more times back and forth then James finely got a opening and bolted home and was safe and won the game for the Bobcats. After the game James’s coach Bob said “ James you deserve this” and handed him the game ball. James then replied “ thanks coach” and ran off.
Hudson Bullis
Period 1/2
10/26/12
Picture2 (Baceball)
"Hey Jake" Kacey said.
ReplyDelete" Oh hi kacey your on time" replied Jake.
" Told you'd I'd be"
" Well its not always that way" said jake honestly. As the two friend sat at their secret place on the ebandid train track as every friday at least the fridays kacey showed up. Jake was loyal to the promise that they had made that summer to meet at the track every friday so they could still get to talk because they went to different schools this year for the first time. Kacey was loyal but not as much she had made new friends and want to be with them on fridays to and jake could not be their to embaress her like always.
" So whats happening at your school" jake asked.
" Not very much I mostly have class" kacey replied.
" what about beside class?"
" I have friends."
" Cool but are you doing anything Tuesday?"
" Why?" Kacey asked.
" well I thought we could hang out."
" I'm sorry I can't."
" Why not"
" Cause I have plans with friends."
" Friends more important than me your kindergarden though now best friend?"
" No but friends can't I have friends Besides you?
Mathany, Leslie
LA/SS period 4-5
1st picture
It was a great day for baseball. The Little League World Series. it was the bottom of the 9th. Ryan is up to bat. Im on base.the pitcher is ceaping a close watch. He's in the stretch, he fires im going. I'm halfway thier, I reach the bag,I slide. As im sliding the ball is way of and hits me in the helmet.I pop up and look at our third base couach giving me the sign to keep running. Im rounding third im going home. I see the catcher he just caught the ball, but I keep going. I put my shoulder down and ram into him. But he still has the ball, Im out. I think, what is our teamates going to say. "Shane what did you think you were doing. Ryan is up to bat, he's our best hitter you should have stopped. Now were out of the world series, all because of you."
ReplyDeleteWeaver,Shane
Period 4/5
LASS
picture 2
It was a school day, cold and rainy, which of course was a typical day in Oregon. Michael had a math test later on that day, and he completely forgot that he had a math test. As soon as he got to math the teacher said "Did everyone complete their study guide?" Michael slapped himself thinking "Oh no I forgot we had a math test today!" As the teacher started passing out math tests he panicked and exclaimed "Math tests are stupid!" The math teacher looked at him very clued as he covered his mouth. Michael said "I am so sorry I did not mean what I said, i was just very panicked that we have a test today I. I feel so embarrased." The math teacher looked at him taking his glasses off and explaining to Michael that he can just take the test tomorrow. "Thank you so much Mr. Rogers, you are the best" voiced Michael
ReplyDeleteCarper,Eric
Period 1/2
LASS
Picture 4
It was a beautiful day! The sun was shining bright and the lake was reflecting the sun like a mirror. Sophie was hypnotized to the shinning water.
ReplyDelete"Look, there is a fish," exclaimed Sophie!
"I see it! It is coming near the bait," replied David.
The large fish was biting on the bait! David tried really hard to pull the fish out of the water, but it seemed like the hook was edged into a huge boulder! David started off standing straight and then ended up falling in the lake! Sophie watched the large fish slip away and saw a small fish after the large fish left.
As David was getting out of the water, the small fish was nibbling on the bait. He yanked the line quickly and the fish flew to land. Both David and Sophie held the small fish and looked at it. Then they let it go and watched it freely swim away.
"I can't believe I caught a fish," David voiced, “but then I let it go."
"You did catch a fish, but the lake caught you and then let you go," Sophie said laughing!
Ajay Pallekonda,
LA/SS, Period 1/2
Picture #3 (Boy and Girl at a Lake)
"ugggh " i moaned as i laid in bed. my mom walked in
ReplyDelete"oh honey you look terrible we better take your temputure " she said as she stuck a thermometor deep into my throat after 30 minuets she had a look of concern
"whats wrong" i asked
"105.2" my face was surprised as i felt my breakfast coming up my throat i ran to the bathroom as i vomited. my mom ran after me and comforted me she called then called a doctor.when the doctor arrived he was concered as well.
"we should take some shots just to be safe"
"be safe of what?" my mom said while she started raising her voice.
"swine flu" he replied. i was scared they didnt have a cure for swine flu yet. the doctor left to get his health bag.
"mom i scared"i stuttered
"it ok honey. its just a new virus they just want to make sure"
when the doctor returned he had the biggest needle i had ever seen he walked over and stuck it in my arm it was a piercing pain it was almost unbearable. He gave me a baind aid and a lollipop. i licked my lollipop with anticipation wile the doctor checked my blood. i finished my lollipop and immediatly started feeling more vomit coming up my throat once again i ran to the bathroom. nd when i returned the results were in. it was positive. i could see in my mothers eyes that she was tearing up by wanted to be strong so she kept back her tears.
"am.. am i gonna die" this was to much for my mom to handle she ran out of the room bauling.
"we arent sure we dont know very much about the deisease so anything could happen "
"i thanked the doctor and he left"
i fell on the bed and felt dizzy and then naucious and then it all went black. when i wole up i was in a weird room with scientists and doctors all trying to figure out how to cure me. i could see my mom outside the room feeling sick i tried to call my mom but a needle with green liquid went into my skin the last thing i ever saw was my mom yelling my name and running in the room.
Lottie Bauer
Period 1/2
sick girl in bed
Bob and Bobby were sitting on the train tracks. Chatting, laughing, teasing.
ReplyDelete“Watch out, a train,” said Bobby. Bob worriedly looks back along the tracks.
“Made you look,” screeched Bobby gleefully.
“No, wait there is a train,” said Bob. “Run.”
“SPLAT! BANG! CRUNCH!
“Oh.. liked that backpack,” said Bob.
Nicholas Meisburger ^
ReplyDelete(Sorry mine is late, I tried to turn it in earlier, but it didn't show up on the computer)
ReplyDeleteScout lay awake, cuddled beneath her striped sheets. The thermometer lay in her mouth, and the temperature did not seem to be getting any better. She reached down to grab a Kleenex, but came to find that she had used up the entire box, and the garbage can next to her bed was overflowing, though Scout was too miserable to reach down and pick up the mess.
"Mom!" she moaned over, and over again, until she finally heard her mothers footsteps climbing up the stairs.
Mills, Amber
LA/SS 4/5
10/28/12
"What?" her mother asked, as she opened the bedroom door.
"Can you get me some Kleenex, and chicken noodle soup?" asked Scout. Her mother looked at her as if Scout was missing something.
"Please?" added Scout, her mother smiled..
"That's better," she said. "I'll go get the Kleenex, but will have to finish up my work before I can make you soup."
"Sure, that's fine, thanks mom."
"I'll be back in a minute," her mom said as she walked out of the room, quietly closing the door behind her.
Sorry forgot my name on the one above
ReplyDeleteMills, Amber
LA/SS 4/5
10/28/12
Picture #3
ReplyDeleteGeorge and Lina were fishing at the pond when.
"I got one I got one!" shouted George.
"Quickly real it in!" exclaimed Lina.
The two were eager and wanted to see what type of fish they had captured. As the pull was getting stronger they were about to give up when the object came flying out the water zooming by so fast the couldn't identify it.
"What was that!" George shouted.
Lina sat there with a confused look on her face and her mouth opened. Though the battle was not over yet the pull came back when Lina began to tap on Georges shoulder
"George!" Lina yelled.
Ignoring his sister he reeled in the object to discover what he eagerly worked hard to obtain.
"Oh great!" said George.
"I tried to tell you." said Lina
"Its a boot!"
Lina approached George to try to comfort him but he snorted and ran to the hill which was above them and sat on it in anger. After about 5 minutes Lina came up to see how George was. George was cross and didn't want to talk to Lina. Lina pulled up a white bucket splattered with dirt and showed it to George. George looked inside and saw a beautiful salmon with sun drenched scales and he just sat there and smiled.
Carpenter,Evan
LASS/4/5
10/28/12
was in late because my internet wasn't working.
"SO....MUCH....HOMEWORK!" Andy moaned as he blew his nose and continued studying.
ReplyDelete"Andy? How's your studying going sweety?" his mother chirped from the kitchen.
Andy was stressed, he didn't know what to do, he wanted to be done. All he wanted was to be done. "I'm fine mom."
"Want some cookies honey? Sometimes the warm chocolate chips help trigger thoughts." Mrs. Darrleens asked her son calmly as usual.
"Mom," Andy said, "can I have ginger snaps?"
Mrs. Darrleens replied with a simple "of corse you can, what ever helps you."
"OH!!! And can you bring me my iPod?" Andy asked.
Mrs. Darrleens left and came beack five minuted later with 24 gingger snaps and an iPod. "Here sweetie, have fun studying. If you need anything just let me know."
"Thanks mom, you're the best! Love you," Andy said right as his mom walsed out the door.
Sophia Mantell
DeleteLA 4/5
10-28-12
It was a thursday afternoon and Kyle had three projects and two sheets of math. Kyle wasn't the fastest worker or on task. His mom hadn't heard from him yet. She normally could hear him while he did his work. Then his mom shouted up the stairs," When will you finish, I've been cooking dinner for three hours and you have only finished one project and one sheet of math," She sceamed" at least complete one more thing before you eat dinner!"Mom rampaged up the stairs! When she got to his room she stood in amazement Kyle standing on a ladder putting the final touches on his three foot tall "Alexander the Great" sculpture.
ReplyDeleteMarcus Taylor per 1/2